[Cereal]

eviction:

some beautiful words, the savana you dont hear about such beautiful scenery so loved that.. i love the story of the cat its very powerful im really enjoy its a very good story.. very pretty it didnt drift it was a solid story all the way through plus it had good thoughts in reference to art really set the tone.. thanks..

universe:

i like the family values of how detailed your verse its already eclipsed eviction with such few lines by the time you dropped the reference to the name eviction/house ownership.. landlord.. dope.. i like how you showed the food intake section.. dope ending private message..

vote = universe

just more detailed and enjoyable..