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Old 01-19-2023, 11:01 PM   #9
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NYC dammit spitz, what is this? I’m mean the rhyming was impressive. It had crazy train of thought. It employed various elements of the pic so I can’t say it wasn’t on topic. It just had very little comment. Seems like ur channeling my best friend Andrew Flores for this one.

Sym this was an interesting take on the topic. I like the singular seconds repetition. Like everyone has a build up to that one particular moment. I think it’s supposed comment on that one moment in life despite the different paths. Interesting.

Vote/ Symetrick.
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