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Old 01-17-2023, 04:09 PM   #5
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diablo:

the tension is dope it gets right in your face and doesnt let up.. its faced paced but dragged out so you really get sat in your seat.. though theres lots of action not much is really happening and though i know your good at this style you captured the crowd but the verse was lacking interest.. it just came off as a story about a crowd rather then people in the crowd.. dope none the less..

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just kind of seems hurried and thrown together with the capture of the game it didnt have much in it.. it started off good but then the last 3/4 fell out where it just seemed like a bunch of scribbles.. i mean i get it which game they at and whats going on but you didnt flush anything out.. still cool the visualization of the peeps on the ground..

vote = diablo

just a more flushed out verse.. gl guys
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