[Cereal]

universe:
i love the poetry quote super dope..

Stretching myself thin for what? I'm a passive absorbent
That's regulated by the athletic commission of California

dope rhyme ending sound alike is super cool well done..

Tell your nonsensical story, I've already checked out I'm sorry...
For weeks I'm buried in storage yet pre-paired to four-fit
To force slips you need everything in your head geared toward it

dope section pure stanza hot as hell.. loven it.. very good vocab structure wise solid like your style always is..

booo
Everything they bring to the mat parried like Chandler Bing (zing)
horrible line it throws away from the story where it all is personal then it turns it cartoonish too modern and irrelevant to such a dominant diction.. im loven the whole actions of the boxing event description.. the float like a butterfly sub was dope..

I'm high-strung from the feel of it and utterly stranded
thanks for the shout out.. dope piece..

broken:
good match up so far its style for style with the drop of relevant topics.. in the sub plot area.. i like your style better then universes alot more compact with vocab that hits harder with such a tighter flow.. i like the "focus" will smith sub.. i like your description of the character.. the little hint of his muslim belief with the devil drop was nice..

spaghetti knees
nice wordplay of original tongue..

im loven the location drop of Ceaser's palace real nice very colourful.. we have a tree of knowledge at our town hehe.. opponents - scoliosis real real dope.. i love the malcom x drop..
omg what a stanza
of David versus Goliath this confused midget's brawling with giants
his work is on display in the queens hall of science
statues of him bare knuckle battling lions
gladiators have died in this pantheon

i love the parkisons part :)
this is easily the best verse yourve ever done,, well done..

vote = brokenhal0

for a true masterpiece thanks xoxo