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Adverse · 01-07-2023, 11:19 PM

Shockingly I don’t think either one of you looked at the topic here

Civil could be a great writer if he took the art more seriously, the first part of the verse showed promise and then devolved into the usual Zelph shit minus the pegging which was surprising.

DG writes with the lyrical prowess of 2005 Yung Joc, but it comes from the heart, whatever that’s worth. Waaaay too simplistic to actually resonate with me.

I’d give this to DG as she actually had a story to tell and did so well if not a little bit simplistically.

V/DG

01-07-2023, 11:19 PM	#11
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Shockingly I don’t think either one of you looked at the topic here Civil could be a great writer if he took the art more seriously, the first part of the verse showed promise and then devolved into the usual Zelph shit minus the pegging which was surprising. DG writes with the lyrical prowess of 2005 Yung Joc, but it comes from the heart, whatever that’s worth. Waaaay too simplistic to actually resonate with me. I’d give this to DG as she actually had a story to tell and did so well if not a little bit simplistically. V/DG Last edited by Adverse; 01-07-2023 at 11:36 PM.