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Civil Rawr xD:
i love the start you covered the now in such small detail real quick.. and the to be continued was dope i felt that it unfolded enough to call it that.. all lines seem substantial and all vocab good..

Dope girl:
i love this verse the character its the first time i actually saw yours as a little girl.. the story of the betral and the dad part was dope he came out of no where and the story itself was short and sweet.. the story itself was dope..

vote: dope girl

verse was just more prettier all round good luck guys