[Mike Wrecka]

ok sick battle guys.

nigma- its been awesome to seeing you improve as a writer as the season has progressed. in the beginning of this verse I was saying to myself, hmm his end rhymes are not working perfectly for me. which ive had that problem before with your work, but it corrected itself for me halfway through. you gave a rather broad overview of the topic. and it was a tad abstract. but the way you play with words can be rather awesome at times. lines like this

See rhythms spawned of pidgeon squawks, symphonic glistens living on

are really appealing and poetic. good work. a really good verse.

frank- your structure is strange. I think you do it on purpose to make your stuff seem more complex. it works. every line I have no idea when the rhyme is coming, and then it hits you, and hits again and has a sick flow to it. but its not at the end of the line like most people format. and you make words rhyme that I would never think actually rhyme but they do the way you use them. this story was amazing, had me on the edge of my seat. sick verse

overall- I liked both verses. both were strong and the writers should be proud but I liked one more then the other and that was

vote- Frank