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Cereal · 12-13-2022, 10:17 PM

quill:
very cute style almost childish but very entertaining.. thanks so far its dope..
fav line:
"Which is how we wound up w/ bourbons & cigars on the porch"
set the scene perfect.. very colorful and tasty.. i like the showing the photo aspect to very humanized like yall would actually be friends with this cat regaurdless the havok going on :).. kinda getting devious with the missing photos and such such scandalous.. dope ending yeh i loved the vocab and structure man very child like but done with such style that it sort the all round relation of story.. cool all in all..

sral:
i loved you double meaning so subtle lines these little word flips that if your not over examing the verse like an idiot you might actually miss one of them later on and im not saying that in the way of knowing the writers style going in it came off natural.. which was dope.. probably one of the dopest things of seen in years a ten rarity in art.. so kudos.. now i know your throwing subliminals because of the use dogs hehe surely its like it cant be that common place that the topics was dogs then yall used it so early on the way you used it.. loves it though.. i like the business aspect that opened up sort of came out of nowhere def brings life to the verse.. the fact you need "walkies" as a word makes me not care if it is about dogs dog thats hot.. super cool possibly best word used this week even out of mine lol nice one.. the statement part that hit like nearly a whole stanza something like four odd lines or such was fucken dope.. you dont see that around either usually its cluttered with advanced art not done so easily to pallet.. i figured the twist but dope so many aspects of this verse..

vote = sral

i mean he just outshined in soo many parts and yall know in general this was a really weak verse in comparison to how cool this kid is but its on because of certain aspects where as quill general whole thing was in order for what his is just sral came with some fresh points that just owned when it came to voting.. nice job guys g/l

12-13-2022, 10:17 PM	#10
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 859 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312300	quill: very cute style almost childish but very entertaining.. thanks so far its dope.. fav line: "Which is how we wound up w/ bourbons & cigars on the porch" set the scene perfect.. very colorful and tasty.. i like the showing the photo aspect to very humanized like yall would actually be friends with this cat regaurdless the havok going on :).. kinda getting devious with the missing photos and such such scandalous.. dope ending yeh i loved the vocab and structure man very child like but done with such style that it sort the all round relation of story.. cool all in all.. sral: i loved you double meaning so subtle lines these little word flips that if your not over examing the verse like an idiot you might actually miss one of them later on and im not saying that in the way of knowing the writers style going in it came off natural.. which was dope.. probably one of the dopest things of seen in years a ten rarity in art.. so kudos.. now i know your throwing subliminals because of the use dogs hehe surely its like it cant be that common place that the topics was dogs then yall used it so early on the way you used it.. loves it though.. i like the business aspect that opened up sort of came out of nowhere def brings life to the verse.. the fact you need "walkies" as a word makes me not care if it is about dogs dog thats hot.. super cool possibly best word used this week even out of mine lol nice one.. the statement part that hit like nearly a whole stanza something like four odd lines or such was fucken dope.. you dont see that around either usually its cluttered with advanced art not done so easily to pallet.. i figured the twist but dope so many aspects of this verse.. vote = sral i mean he just outshined in soo many parts and yall know in general this was a really weak verse in comparison to how cool this kid is but its on because of certain aspects where as quill general whole thing was in order for what his is just sral came with some fresh points that just owned when it came to voting.. nice job guys g/l __________________ A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass ..