If I'm being blunt, my head hurts after reading this. Both lacked direction in their narrative, and were hindered by grammatical errors. From a creativity stand point, I'd edge it to Cereal. Just a little more substance, even if it was pretty convoluted. I would also say that Cereal edges this from a mechanics stand point. While both had issues in terms of flow, Cereal definitely had the more intricate scheme work.
Vote - Cereal
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