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Quill · 12-04-2022, 07:56 PM

@MMLP This wasn't bad. I think you did a good job fleshing this out. Checked all the boxes thematically. Mechanically, there were a few places (most early on) that I felt could have been smoother. But all it all, it was a solid verse.

12-04-2022, 07:56 PM	#6
Quill Member Join Date: Nov 2018 Posts: 56 Rep Power: 0	@MMLP This wasn't bad. I think you did a good job fleshing this out. Checked all the boxes thematically. Mechanically, there were a few places (most early on) that I felt could have been smoother. But all it all, it was a solid verse.