brokenhal0:
dude was dope the whole thing read like a cahpter out of a graphic novel of soul and valour.. the rhyme scheme was dope all bits and pieces mixed and mashed together well.. the story itself ha heart.. the characters were boss.. good luck..
eviction:
this was cool for what it was very short and sweet for a little thing as such as this it was never really going to stand a chance against something like brokenhal0 but atleast your showed up..
vote = brokenhal0
better round story more rhyme and more flushed out
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