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Old 09-03-2022, 06:42 PM   #6
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This was an enjoyable read on both ends. Halo had colorful verse, monsters, hippos, girls in booty shorts, etc. His verse felt like a comic book coming alive. It felt odd the pandemonium is going on and he thinking about wishing to kiss her, his drunk ass should of save the day if it was like that. Halo, your verses seem to be catering to the crowd to much and not your self. I want to see the real Halo bust out and not care...but to each their own.. Frank, you verse was ground in a sense of reality where you can actually feel that you there and rhymes where on point...I was dope you called dude Johnny walker. The verse even had history of the character and background.
No hate on the brother Halo but Frank got this one.
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