Rican threw around some decent concepts although nothing was exactly hair raising, I think the attacks were definitely one dimensional focusing on just his name and nothing more. Would like to see some variety.
Inc was a little more variable with concepts but the execution wasn’t there. I think Inc needs to put more thought into making his concepts sting. I gave the same sort of advice earlier to Defiant, you’ve got to actually say something that’s going to do damage sometimes being clever isn’t enough. Go for the throat
V/Rican both could have used some rewriting but he was better this week
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