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Old 08-07-2022, 10:03 PM   #11
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Defiant I feel like you had some clever concepts, but the execution is just not there or the things you’re targeting don’t do much damage in this first place. Like the funsies line, It’s just not a good point of attack, I applaud you for using concepts that are probably fresh but execution comes over the fresh takes. It’s been paying off for me to dumb it down and just focus on hard hitting wording and execution over grandiose concepts. I liked harbor and universe bars were decent

Dom had a solid verse here wasn’t as good as last week but did enough to retain the belt here thought opener digits and waffles was nice

So yeah v/Dom comfortably
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