View Single Post
Old 08-05-2022, 07:34 AM   #9
Dominate
Tread Lightly.
 
Dominate's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,310
Battle Record: 26-9


Champed
- Netcees Battle League
- Battle Arena
- Tag Team Tournament III
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"

Rep Power: 18197456
Dominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sharp View Post
UserName's Verse

I’ll clown this Brit, keep talking and ur gettin pounded quick
Your verse is like Resin’s house, full of dumb Flips that never amount to shit
I don't think anyone so far knows Flips = Filipinos? I have seen that wp before but this was still amusing with the rest of it
I’m firing until the sound goes CLICK, ur losing it kid, don’t shake and shout
Of course I’m removing your lid, I always separate the trash when I take it out
It sounds good but I don't entirely get the literal side of this. Seperate the trash from what? Maybe waste collection works differently in America...
Who’s debating now? Geez Dave, you’ve got a fiends face
If a getaway driver made the turns that your teeth make, he’d escape every police chase
LMAO. I don't know if his teeth are actually fucked up but being British makes it believable enough that this hits as a personal. Funny and creative
Your verse is for the birds, all it does is leave a sour vibe
If my verse is for the birds it’s because of all the power lines
It's a good line but it's more swag than diss
Your girl sending me pictures, her & her friends licking her toys
Ain’t been a hard drive this packed full of bitches since ur last road trip with ur boys
lol. pretty good
Verses put everyone to sleep, we can’t listen to Dave
Your bars should come with bedsheets attached like a prison escape
creative, pretty good
Yea I’m a heavyweight, and all my haymakers divide
All you got is cat-like reflexes, which explains why Resin ate you alive
not bad with the personal tie in. I haven't seen this exact one before, but any phrase/idiom with 'cat' in it seems a little tired with the asian food connection
Teeth looking like a western pine was fed through a jet turbine
You’ve never gone the extra mile, but my uppercut will fix that in record time
Your weakest bar here. Set up was creative and amusing though
You dress like a homeless bum, all ur clothes are done
Dave’s closet is all Hand-me-downs, like when Seth asks to hold his son
LMAOOOOOO. Hand me downs ahahahahaha. I literally loled at this.


Dave's Verse

Fuck text I’m catchin bodies and leavin em in vacants
You’re here to cement your place in the playoffs.. I’m here to cement your place beneath my basement
Okay, not bad
Battling my old buddy is kinda weird I won’t front
There really is a lot to unpack here - user brought his own lunch
LMAO. Dope
Dave don’t talk to police. If they wanna know they’d better read my mind
If user rolled over on his friends there’d be nothing left for the feds to even find
Lol again. This is good.
I’m known for pulling all nighters, tear up the city when we turnt out
If you came home in the Wee hours you’d find me pissing in your girls mouth
I want to hate this now that I'm writing the bar by bar breakdown but honestly when I first read it I smiled. I think the placement of this bar straight after two very solid and funny ones was a clever move. This would have been bad as an opener for example but it kinda works once I'm already laughing
She told me you could never last and that was all I had to hear
My dick was inside for so long it came out with gang connections and a tattooed tear
LOL. Creative, I like it
Not really the type to care but my fits are always kinda rare
If he steps out head to toe in drip he’s probably just had to tackle a flight of stairs
Ahahahahah. Yeah, good
I’m rubbing shoulders with celebs.. the type of party he blatantly dreams of
The only star-studded affair he’s ever known was helping LGI to take those jeans off
lol OK. Kinda similar to the Wee bar
My moneys so long I can’t spend it all but I keep tryin
Only thing User’s known to fritter away is every meal in his deep fryer
hahahaha
Take this W and take my pals out - love celebrating and it’s that time my friend
If your boys are giving you chest bumps it’s CPR cus you’ve flatlined again
Not as good as some other bars in here but not bad

Really enjoyable battle guys. Creative and hilarious lines on both sides. Hand me downs was the funniest individual line to me but I think overall I loled a bit more in Dave's verse. All those fat jokes were hitting and were fresh to me.

V/ Dave
__________________
The Bad Guys
Dominate is offline