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Old 08-01-2022, 05:34 PM   #13
Aero
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Dominate:

Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
Hehe.. I didn't like the "from some trash" part... "from trash" would've been cleaner but this was cool
Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
Good grief I wish I would've used this against Frac.. Fuego
And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
Alright, calling his wife an old yeller not as hard though..
Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
LOL.. aight.. didnt like this at first but reading it now I like it
She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
alright
I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
Standard
Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
seems fillerish

Nice verse. Thing about your verses is they will always be technically sound so you can read it days later and a bar I didn't care for I can look at and be like, you know what that's actually pretty good


Resin:

Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
I like the word flux capacitator.. made this bar even better
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
more of a simple concept with a nice delivery
Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
quarter eyes like your eyes only open up a quarter of the way.. I liked this bar.. its harsh, has imagery, creative
It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
Alright, at this point you've overdone it on references. punch is alright, Googled the cover and saw a baby dick so thanks for that smh
This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
I like the idea, a better setup would've made this hit harder
Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
LOL this was nice esp if you know how disgustin User's situation is.
You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss
haha coolish, also kinda silly cuz no one says a nine is dumping in reference to a kid

Your delivery really aids in your punches, sometimes the setups could be more thought out



Okay so on first read I had Resin winning this so I was like I'm not going to vote on this battle because I don't vote on Dom battles where I don't think he's won. On 2nd read I started liking Dom's lines a bit more. The phew line from Dom was bonkers and the river line from Res was Nice too. For me what seperates the two verses is probably the User line. That made go lol, alright... I've got Resin winning this but I'm going to put fear in his heart by putting the word Dom at the bottom. That way I know if you guys actually read. My best friends on the internets are Blue and





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