Suspended ceiling is a solid idea. I see what you're going for with state of affairs, but it's kind of jarringly out of nowhere. Don't play poker so I don't get it. The closer is a cool idea but something about the execution is iffy. Like, 'step down and leave it all to hunter' isn't really applicable to your battle. This kinda need something to work both ways
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