[Sharp]

Opener is wild. Idk if you were here for finding his mugshot, researched it in discussion, or just guessed right, but it's a great personal. The second bar is confusing. I feel like that's the kind of bar to someone else ahead of time like 'does this work'. Ran the block is really basic and I believe has been done. Can't remember a specific instance so I won't say for sure. I think the closer was cool. Ambitious, execution def needed some more work

Solid NS verse. I'm not looking to harp on wording issues cause it sounds like you knew he was no showing. Concepts are generally cool. Looking forward to you getting an opponent who shows