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Old 07-30-2022, 11:45 AM   #8
Adverse
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- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

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Res:

Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
^ cool. good reference
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
^ like the connection between Korg and face rocked but this didn’t work for me

Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
^ dope, this was cool

It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
^ lol okay

This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
^ decent concept could have used some retweaking

Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
^ filler

You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./
Mahfucka.
^ I’ve heard this kind of concept used before, cool connection to him being a teacher though

Dom:
Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
^ decent. Like how both openers are trash bars lol

Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
^ this is dope and funny lol

And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
^ ehh decent I guess, alright flip on the Asian eats dog thing

Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
^ lol alright

She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
^ hahaha cool

I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
^ this is aight way to keep the gambling connection going

Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
^ this was filler to me.

Res mentioned the fact he had writer’s block and man you could feel it throughout. Wording was off and concepts were hard to come by. I think he gave it his best but I’ve got Dominate being the more consistent battler here

V/Dom
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