[Eviction]

I disagree with some of the votes but not the outcome, I think my rhyming took a back seat to the story and some of yall missed things like the ending didn't come out of no where as it was teased a few times since the beginning and again when I said me and you are worlds a part if I read that I would know where the story is going. I guess that's just me though, sometimes I think you guys are paraphrasing the vote above you, I'm not going to act like a bitch over losing though like nyc, my typical rhyme schemes for champ matches carry on for 6 lines but I cut it down to 4 so I have more room to flesh out the story.
also some guy commented that my rhymes come out of nowhere, that's just how to keep shit interesting in terms of rhyme schemes, if they appear in predictable spots then the shit is boring, if i wanted to do a more abstract piece where the rhymes appear periodically throughout the prose you guys wouldn't even notice that I'm rhyming still, as you're trained to always know where the rhymes are going to be placed, and also you can write a whole piece without rhyming at all.

I won't mention that nyc took the plot of my story and used it in his, he made the takeaway point of my whole story his first line. LOL.