This is literally the third time I’ve written this out so I’m going to try and make it quick
Eviction had some great rhymes here, he has really great emphasis on the flow and multis, really makes every piece a smooth ride. I don’t think this piece worked in your favor however, I think you half attempted to set up a narrative and then kind of went off on a tangent, you’re at your best when you can put together a sort of free form verse that doesn’t have a concrete narrative, you tie it together with a great flow and some awesome raw emotion, however I don’t think you are a great storyteller IMO. We seen it against Frank earlier this season and again now. You were out of your element, but valiant effort sir.
Spitz almost surprised me with how basic his concept was, after last week though dropping that many bars against Universe and beating him at his own game, I feel like he may have been a little bit spent here. But despite the taking the picture at face value thing, he did a good job telling his story and I think the father/daughter dialogue switches were interesting and well done, genuinely felt like two different people writing. Great job of bringing characters to life. I think you won this pretty handily. You had a grasp on what you were trying to bring to life better here.
V/NYC
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