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Old 07-28-2022, 07:56 PM   #90
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Appreciate the feedback <3

Re line limit: I was gonna pitch this format to you actually, - I wrote more than 100 lines but the reader only gets between 14 and 60 of them depending on what path they choose.
Yeah this is a dope idea. This way you can write whatever you want and the reader can decide what they read and vote on, thus removing the handcuffs from the writer yet not overtaxing the reader... Pretty cool. Seems like the best of both worlds.

I did something similar to what you did once, kind of a choose your own adventure that could be approached 3 different ways but it still required a full read through. You can check it out below if you wish:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149379

But I honestly think you did it better and made the entire piece an option to the reader and not a commitment. If you chose the wrong path and died you could've just walked away like fuck, oh well... and STILL got enjoyment out of it... That was the brilliance of it. I kept reading because I WANTED to, not because I was required to.

I just hope people appreciate the effort behind it as much as I do.
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