Dom:
There isn’t a problem here I can’t get the Draco to solve
When that ringggg light up Saint’s head trust there’s no halo involved
^ decent personal connection but as a general punchline this is dated to me.
I’ll beat you in every category. That’s nothing but honesty fam
Your idea of a competitive edge is jerking off for as long as you can
^ lol alright
At this point I’d be stunned if your phrasing was actually crisp dawg
Wp like a defibrillator - if what you say is CLEAR then it’s gonna be a bigggg shock
^ dope here
You’ve seen my name in every top ten - I’m murder with it sucker
20 years in, YOUR name still as Listless as your girl is when you fuck her
^ haha this is cool.
Bitch loves it when I choke her, always calling my dick boss
I got her working graveyard shift - she seeing stars when she gets off
^ cool closer
Saint:
Ayy. dick measuring contest vs Ryan's NOT gonna happen
Watchmen: this Ozymandias never beating the Blue God, no Dr Manhattan
^ this is decent I get what you’re going for, kinda wordy though
How you lecture w/ that gay accent? Kids got their eyes wide
Bet them long readings got more palms to faces than psychics showing life lines
^ alright cool
We KNOW Austin carries the team. & keeps this faggot monitored
U'd lose ur shit without getting an Aer Tag.. plus he doubles as an apple polisher
^ I mean decent, again kinda long winded and the punch isn’t heavy
Still living fantasies in moms basement free. had ur fun yet?
Fitting roleplaying goes down in a Domme Dungeon... 'cept the switch to sublet
^ alright here
Ya girl went down while I played w/ her clit. said I'm better in bed
It signaled the bitch was psycho by taking a digit in a circle motion next to da head
^ I get it but didn’t feel like it connected very well
In my opinion, Saint was kind of lost in the wording of some of his lines which took away the impact, and some didn’t really have hard punches in the first place. So those two things together killed any momentum he’d gather. Dom wasn’t in top form here but he did connect the jabs he threw out there, only thing I can even consider not good was maybe the opener because the overall concept is played? Nonetheless I think Dom won easily here
V/Dom
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