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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
I will say the first verse you posted, while I commend you for being able to carry it thru nicely , I find the individual bars themselves pretty mid.
Flow looks top notch and its impressive writing, but from a don Demarco standpoint it kindve seems like your forgoing potential bangers to carry out a long multi scheme that while solid is a bit underwhelming from what you're capable of / have shown in the past.
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nah I'm using the second verse for the battle. I just really want to use the bars:
I'm banging with a colt like Allison Mack
The big show, if you hear well I'm coming out with a strap
but I dont feel like either of them are good enough to end the 4 bar segment, I'm trying to come up with 2 more bars. Ideally I want a big punch at the end of it. I just wrote all these bars in hopes that one would land as a surefire haymaker, and it doesn't sound like any of them are. I'm throwing the rest of them out or just reusing some of them in a battle I don't really care about