[Rawn MD]

Well that was interesting

halo - maybe it’s me, but I felt a good quarter or your lines were just there to rhyme, and gave it a more long winded feeling, then concise and poignant. However, even these “filler” type lines still contributed to the story in a way (meaning they remained on topic and cArried it, but the story would have been the same with or without them.) It would have been nice to see some stylistic show though, which I felt was lacking. The flow was solid, I think there was like only two or three times you may have gone a syllable to many, the story remained on point throughout, and your word choice was solid for the most part… only one part threw me with the tenses and felt like it just didn’t belong “plug my mica into open satellites” - just seemed weird to me here. Overall though pretty solid verse.

Adverse - idk wtf you did there lol. I honestly was enjoying your story more, I felt it to be more engaging and your word choice to be better than your opponent. Then I got to the end, and you threw me for a total loop. I mean I don’t even know what to say, you didn’t even try to rhyme it. Lol. It’s like you intentionally threw this round, even with your made up cameo. “Adverse summoned me here to explain the rest of the story he was too lazy to write” Donnie explains.” Pretty much sums it up. Which is why you lost this round, which I truly feel you could have won, even if you didn’t try to go and try to match line for line.

Vote- Halo