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Old 07-17-2022, 01:54 AM   #6
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So obviously this was a one sided battle, Sinacog didn’t bring much to the table and his connection with the topic is always a little loose, this time “sand” being what he took away from it.

Rawn I liked your verse though I felt like you probably only gave it minimal attention this week (which no one blames you for) your use of alliteration and repetition brings a lot of poetic qualities to your verse. I thought it was a little vague at times like it was hard to follow along, but like I said I’m willing to give you a pass on almost anything this week seeing who your opponent was. Good work hope to see you stick around

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