Dom:
Act up it’s endin in violence. Even buck at your friends if they wildin
Bullets roar through a circle - that’s the fuckin MGM Lion
^ cool opener imo not too hard but a good solid hit
You & your girl start bickering and she come straight to my dick for a ride
Funny she call urs a matchstick… whenever it’s a rough patch, that box gettin hit on the side
^ dope
Guy’s mug is a fucking nightmare, think of it late in the night
Got a noodle that’ll keep you up, no pool flotation device
^ lol funny but it didn’t really hit for me kinda filler
Sharp said he had a chance here? Sooo polite. Total class.
Too bad Argon get his hopes up and find out it was only a Noble Gas
^ good wordplay here. Decent closer
Ahirman:
Here’s an idea, faggot…
learn to properly speak before your lifes unconscious
Only reason you got good Bar Dialogue b/c you search & bite his concepts
^ this is okay but you been around long enough you seen one of these type of lines done on almost every textcee that’s been around for years
Your boo deep throat hard, then open cooch soon as I say
Tonight she’ll drip my nut in your bed, that’s a true “ooooos on Friday”
^ I mean okay but kinda statementish, alright flip on what he said I guess
Let this 9 bake a dude, pull up where you sought to calm
No Indian cuisine,…but for that bread? It’s nothing to Pappadom
^ set up could have alluded to the punch a little more, good wordplay though
I hate this battle shit… this legends writtens soft
We see you in the archives with more underlined words than Bags Vs Sonacog
^ I’m not really following this one, are underlined words a bad thing?
Think Dom won this one pretty handily, and didn’t really try, Ahirman needs to do some fresher concepts and not bring a bunch of quotes in unless they’re tied to something insane, I think that was my biggest problem when I first started battling here is trying to dig up a huge amount of dirt just to find inconsequential stuff and I mean the flips were clever but you’re trying to inflict damage to your opponent, not just say funny shit.
V/Dom
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