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Old 07-15-2022, 09:41 AM   #9
Adverse
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Aero:
You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me
^ LOVE the idea here, made me laugh, may have been able to be worded better

Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics
Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness
^ damn bro. I’ve seen the ‘Wanda’ wordplay before but this shit was hard

I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married
Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :(
^ lmao same here. Funny bar but could use some restructuring IMO

Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke
You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note
^ I get this but I didn’t really like it

Wand:
A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime
U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time
^ ehh decent enough, cool idea

Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck
For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck
^ the idea is cool but I don’t think it hits

Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock
Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock
^ this was decent enough

Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man:
If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can
^ really like this one. Dope concept

I think I’ll take Aero off consistency, I think you both missed on some good opportunities but I think Aero had higher low points IMO so going for him. Nice battle though from both

V/Aero
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