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Old 07-14-2022, 10:57 PM   #6
Adverse
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This wasn’t great gentlemen,

Zelph obviously had a rush job of a verse here. Half the shit didn’t rhyme, Aaron it out was an almost

Defiant still rusty and focused way too much on the Milan thing. First bar was okay but could have used some major rewording . The rest was ehh

Defiant actually had something resembling a battle verse while Zelph sleepwalked this one.

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