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Old 07-09-2022, 10:53 PM   #10
Adverse
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Ahirman:

Say you bust gats with lasers, stop the gang front!
Only beam on your mind is in your basement to hang from
^ I don’t get the suicidal connection but this bar was cool

Suicide? Ahr clip kid if I hear that sob season
Nigga life come to a KwikStop & detectives find dawg bleeding
^ this is going over heads but I get the connection. Kwikstop is that powder shit that keeps dogs nails from bleeding if you cut too deep right? It was decent for what it was

My guns on kill streak, blood clots form in groups
I don’t use these arms in vein, so cut yours b4 I shoot
^ wasn’t too clever and you’re beating the suicidal horse to death

I spit game off the top, rope your bitch & give her dick
She hate when you randy, savage…your sex game deader than macho & Elizabeth
^ decent I suppose.

Saint:

wow you beat Sin. & we overlooked punches were really horseshit
somehow shakily moved on up when those swings didn't hit Jack like Wendy Torrance
^ nice!

no-one congratulated your return to write or gave respect to that
last time hands came together for a pin to the pad you lost an armwrestling match
^ okayish I guess

& bae love going topless YELLING: 'put that long D between here'
Rod n Cones; my titty fucks left her eye makeup so smeared she couldn't see clear
^ this was a deep cut that left me perplexed before googling. Didn’t really dig it maybe just me

ima gun butt em there. extension hang lower than rapunzels hair
Neuralink IPO.. leave part of the stock in ya brain so big Elon Musk would share
^ this was dope

Ahirman is on the right track, he came out swinging but 6/8 of his lines were focused on the same thing that I think is kind of a deep cut personal in the first place to people like me that don’t know INF’s depression issues. Nonetheless, I think had he spread his attacks right he would have won but INF had more variety and some harder hits. So I’ll give it to him

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