this fool front like he a real nigger...and yea, I'm saying it w/ a grrrrrrr.....
I'm white, yup... and it's about to get racial.
U beating me? Uh....Surrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeee..........
lolwtf @ how long this bar is.. not feeling it either..
Man, you'll get lynched so quick it'll be a flashback for yah grand pops....
all u mafucka's talk w/ ZzzzZZ...so y should Hymz & his manz not....
lol, dece
here's a grammar lesson...and this isn't just for all u dark fucks...
I keep the hammer present, so test me bitch..and X'll leave u marked up.
meh, nah
that's a 'gun bar' for all u battle nerds, u fucking faggots should get a life..
cuz while u sit n' jerk ya dick to schemes & multis...ima be balls deep in yah wife.
rofl, nah
her pussy get wax'd, on some slip n' slide shit...
and no, this ain't a punch. get sick and die bitch.
lol, k.
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hymnz was feeding/swaying throughout his verse which is sad/retarded, & i would breakdown his verse anyway but it wouldn't be helpful to him elevating. your verse was god awful. Now so I don't come across as a hater, I would like to say you CAN elevate. You need to take time w/ your bars, make them more complex & hard hitting. this isn't a freestyle audio battle, which is how you seem to be treating text battling. Look at top heads battles & try to elevate. peace.
v/ xnub
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