Netcees - View Single Post - WEEK TWELVE: DOMINATE (7-2) vs SOULE’ (0-0) DOMINATE WINS 4-0

Universe · 07-08-2022, 05:57 PM

Excuse this brief little vote guys, I'm on the go here but wanted to check this out.

Soule, super impressive verse on short notice. Really created an immersive atmosphere and made me feel I was deep in Lousiana. Cool take on the topic... Not really what I would've done but I like the unique approach. I felt technically it was a pretty well put together verse as well, you even mixed up the rhyme scheme here and there to keep us on our toes and make sure we were paying attention lol. Dope.

Good stuff man, and again, I apologize for the brevity of this review. Good to see you here.

Dom, this was my favorite verse from you all season. I LOVED every bit of this. Top to bottom just a masterful display of how to execute a topical to perfection. Clean, crisp, technically flawless with an amazingly twisted story. I have to say that I did guess where this was going in a general sense as soon as Sue was revealed to be an abbreviation of a Hindi name, the whole Indian descent angle and this creepy dude trying to pick her up at the bar... I knew it wouldn't end well... but it didn't take away my enjoyment of it. It actually heightened it because I couldnt wait to get there... and when I did, I was absolutely impressed with how you executed everything.

This is how you write a topical verse, kids. Take notes. Dom is one of the best to do it. If you don't know... now you know.

Vote: Dominate

07-08-2022, 05:57 PM	#7
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Excuse this brief little vote guys, I'm on the go here but wanted to check this out. Soule, super impressive verse on short notice. Really created an immersive atmosphere and made me feel I was deep in Lousiana. Cool take on the topic... Not really what I would've done but I like the unique approach. I felt technically it was a pretty well put together verse as well, you even mixed up the rhyme scheme here and there to keep us on our toes and make sure we were paying attention lol. Dope. Good stuff man, and again, I apologize for the brevity of this review. Good to see you here. Dom, this was my favorite verse from you all season. I LOVED every bit of this. Top to bottom just a masterful display of how to execute a topical to perfection. Clean, crisp, technically flawless with an amazingly twisted story. I have to say that I did guess where this was going in a general sense as soon as Sue was revealed to be an abbreviation of a Hindi name, the whole Indian descent angle and this creepy dude trying to pick her up at the bar... I knew it wouldn't end well... but it didn't take away my enjoyment of it. It actually heightened it because I couldnt wait to get there... and when I did, I was absolutely impressed with how you executed everything. This is how you write a topical verse, kids. Take notes. Dom is one of the best to do it. If you don't know... now you know. Vote: Dominate __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..