[Sharp]

These bullets blow your ass to smithereens, not heeding any calls for peace
Predictions say it’s All Saints Day, tell that to whatever pieces that the Hallows Eve
really cool idea but Hallows Eve/Leave doesn't work for me, and the fact that I'm scratching my head going 'leave? Sieve? See?' tells me this doesn't do it for me. Low key props to Inf in rotating the aka for stuff like this
Sharp’s voice - cuz when I go live with that mag it’ll blow you away
Family affair, auto tear your babies up like I ain’t heard of Roe v Wade
both punches are solid but a little basic. This definitely hits, but would've liked to see you try to flesh them out more fully with their own setups. Setup was better than the punch imo, and that takes away from the punchline
Overstuffed confusing bars to compensate for the fact what he’s spittin is average
Audience guaranteed to see old dude soar over their head like they bought tickets to Maverick
lmao. Nice
Maybe my NBL run was a fluke, but when’s the last time you seen a final four?
Probably after the meteor hit and you were one of the last living dinosaurs
cool idea but the wording is awkward
You on the road to the championship, I pull up beside you and peel clips
He be peeling too...the feds pulling Saint off the seat like Will Smith
two small gripes. I had to google this one because I assumed it was will Smith the actor, even though you made it obvious in the setup that's an old reference. Also, changing from second to third person between the setup and punchline can get distracting or make it convoluted (didn't happen here but generally good to watch out for). Still works. Losing a lot of impact for me on second read tbh




Told me you're a small text guy. & shown the breakup while streaming
Talk about a 'Pinch to Zoom': She's upscale, had me grab her ass in the live meeting
there's a lot going on here and it just makes it feel convoluted by the third read
Goes down astounding; likes it rough beggin 'hit me in the mouth please'
Jesus!....Way she lick balls before the strike rivals John Turturro in Big Lebowski
lmao. I fuck with it
I went deeep in her private area. Smashed til it black & sore
Finally saw eye to eye when i slid in right.. u'd think i’d need a password at the door
I feel like I get this but also like I don't get this
Fatty. Your idea of Ranch Hand is dip without chips clown
Ad a Binge-eater. That face a Porcine after a loss cuz we see a Pig Out
had to google the pronunciation and got 'poor sign'. Poor sign after a loss is weird to me

Just read Doms vote. It's poor scene? It works on a technical level but the idea is hard to find dope
U backmasking up!? Speak of the Devil- punches NEVER sway me
'Verse plays are so backwards he sends mixed messages like metal records in the 80s
this is a great concept, execution is solid, but you're kinda infamous for having harder to understand bars

I'm going to reread this later cause it's really close to me. Ad more consistent, Inf hit harder.


EDIT: Ad I have the gunbars and maverick. Inf I have the lebowski and closer. Will Smith and porcine kinda cancel each other out for me as bars that were good in a technical sense but conceptually DOA. Shits a real toss up but I have Inf with slightly stronger hits. Good battle, close, honestly expecting this takes forever to close so fuck you guys for that

Jk <3

V/Inf by a nose