These bullets blow your ass to smithereens, not heeding any calls for peace
Predictions say it’s All Saints Day, tell that to whatever pieces that the Hallows Eve
All Saints Day was a good name flip concept but either the flip was quite bad or I didn't get it - was it supposed to be 'whatever pieces that the hollows leave'?
Sharp’s voice - cuz when I go live with that mag it’ll blow you away
Family affair, auto tear your babies up like I ain’t heard of Roe v Wade
OK current event line
Overstuffed confusing bars to compensate for the fact what he’s spittin is average
Audience guaranteed to see old dude soar over their head like they bought tickets to Maverick
BLAOW. Nice one Addy. Solid personal punch + current event flip + good delivery. Good line.
Maybe my NBL run was a fluke, but when’s the last time you seen a final four?
Probably after the meteor hit and you were one of the last living dinosaurs
Ehhhh. I like the personal angle and tone in the set up, the second line didn't move me
You on the road to the championship, I pull up beside you and peel clips
He be peeling too...the feds pulling Saint off the seat like Will Smith
OK punch/nameflip. Had to google the reference.
Told me you're a small text guy. & shown the breakup while streaming
Talk about a 'Pinch to Zoom': She's upscale, had me grab her ass in the live meeting
It's a cool wp idea but you as the writer had to work too hard to make it work and I as the reader had to work too hard to understand it
Goes down astounding; likes it rough beggin 'hit me in the mouth please'
Jesus!....Way she lick balls before the strike rivals John Turturro in Big Lebowski
LOL. Watched this semi recently. This is pretty good.
I went deeep in her private area. Smashed til it black & sore
Finally saw eye to eye when i slid in right.. u'd think i’d need a password at the door
private area/need a password OK OK. Saw eye to eye when I slid right in - ?? I've tried for more than a couple mins to puzzle it out and I don't get it.
Fatty. Your idea of Ranch Hand is dip without chips clown
Ad a Binge-eater. That face a Porcine after a loss cuz we see a Pig Out
Describing someone's face as a "poor scene" is weird. The rest of it works well.
U backmasking up!? Speak of the Devil- punches NEVER sway me
'Verse plays are so backwards he sends mixed messages like metal records in the 80s
The 'verse plays backwards'/devil wp concept was dope. "he sends mixed messages" is not much of a punch though.
Adverse had the LOTB, next best was Saint's Big Lebowski line. Besides that it's pretty much Adverse having simple/OKish concepts that were delivered well enough vs Saint having better and more creative ideas but with flaws in the execution. It's pretty close in that sense and will prob just come down to voter preference. Adverse's Maverick line was made stronger by the fact that 2 out of 5 of Saint's bars were too convoluted for me here lol... I think for that reason I'm gonna edge this to him.
V/ Adverse
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