Orc, liked the wording but this verse read a bit rushed concept/punch wise. Shrimp was alright but I liked the flip blues did better, ur opener was decent, fresh. Didn't like other 2 aside from wording.
Dom attacked more.. opener an closer were good, no misses in this short battle from his side. Sonic I've seen similar, aight, other did too, but still enough here.
V Dom
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