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mike:

dude this was cool you def fipped the topic.. you took out of this world i loved the terrain you painted and the dudes job.. i loved how descriptive you were with what your character does and what else is out there for his world.. i was dry and stale but yet so colourful because of how pretty it would be to ive in such a subtle world in anyway.. all in all the rhyme scheme was dope and the all round delivery was cool tight little piece..
prolly one of your best.. thanks

frank:

man what can i say trully beautiful the best piece i read all season.. im not a big fan of reading verses twice but that one was so pretty if im bored and around the way im a def go back over it and check twice.. i loved the story man the jupitor juniper berries thing and the depiction of space the train as its going through space and just how pretty the world look as the dude/conductor keeps going around enjoying his time in outter space.
cool story i think you did really well prolly 8/10.. i loved the structure of it to.. very original..

vote = frank

just an all .round good verses i think both peeps really brought their piece to the table.. gl