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Old 06-18-2022, 09:32 AM   #4
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Cool battle

Eviction- story was kind of all over the place imo. First I thought it was about a gun maker , then a war veteran , then someone that worked in a crematory. Maybe that was the progression of the character through the years but the transitions didn’t make that clear enough. Rhymes were good , multis were decent flow was choppy in some spots for me. Overall it was a good effort but you didn’t elevate to the level needed to beat an opponent like Francis

Frank- great story. Enjoyed it throughly. Had some real emotion to it. Good ending too. You continue to string together multis for an almost insane length of lines. And the best part is they all relate to the narrative perfectly. Top tier level stuff here


Eviction gave it his all and that’s commendable. But to beat frank you have to lay down a phenomenal verse. This wasn’t that. Good battle props to both. Evict will get another crack at it in the playoffs.

Vote - Francis
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