timeless - liked the little wordplay at the end where you used the morgan/captain that was slick, my only complaint is the predictable rhymes, try ot throw in slant or near rhymes so your rhyme schemes aint so predictable, you did in some parts, but like towards the end they become too predictable, I also liked your story and the imagery was on point.
masater rock - you also had a predictable scheme, and there wasn't much to it, a lot was one syllable rhymes, other than that I think your wording at times made the piece borning, like in the beginning where you said ever so' fraintly, I think that could have been reworded, I went in thinking this is going to be a "it was a dark and stormy night" kind of story, like the stranger things reference, even working in the upside down world differently with "ups and downs", I say the only thing that i had an issue with was the wording and your schemes could be more creative, last few pieces I read from you seemed rush.
THis is an easy decision for me, timeless obvisouly put more effort into his verse, I don't think master rock has been able to find the motivation, however still capable of dropping a good verse, imagine if master rock put effort into his shit, we would all be in trouble, I think for now I'm going with timeless.
v/timeless
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