This was a cool battle
Both texcees have a talent with words but a kind of inability to stay within the bounds of conventional grammatical norms.
Now, my grammar isn’t perfect either, it’s just better than yours, so it’s slightly annoying to see talent wasted on
* some dope bars *
followed by
* something that’s comprehensible via imagination leap & intuition but delivered in a way that’s garbage *
Look at halo he started dope asf with the star references but failed to
Keep the tension going with wack filler lines
It’s really that simple
Frank has some examples of strange wording but he at least
Held the tension
Story was pretty cool btw
I’m voting for Frank
There were some contrived instances in frank’s verse (LOL HUH like - ummm…what?), and some instances of weird shit in halos ( too instead of to etc). Kind of a letdown for a contenders Match. Like, we’re all grown men can we edit in the basic 4th grade shit before we post or are we weed high teenagers gone off 6 4lokos??!?
Anyways, I gave my vote already
If I’m to understand the reality of man poetry in the near future, I’d say that a Tournament of sorts pooling from the 7 dimensional realms of the Internet would work, namely the still active heads available from sites such as
www.hipho-