Eviction / this was a lot more abstract than what I’m used to seeing from you, feel like the topic was kind of in the background and not really referred to much. In the vain of your usual work you vented your heart out and had a lot of good imagery and striking emotional bits. Like I’ve said before your writing reminds me of my own before I started doing these watered down shticks. Anyways this wasn’t your best showing but was more than enough here and I liked this but most
“ A split personality I said it in jest, even I wonder who I am today until I switch back.
The sky was being illuminated by witchcraft, so I stayed inside where it was pitch black.
I only travel on occasions, so how did I end up with this scar from gravel and abrasions
Staying to myself is a smart plan, that’s how you dodge the shrapnel from invasions”
Objective:
Yeah you and Master Rock have a similar problem with just not having the time to completely be committed to a piece for the week at hand. Still had some cool bits here but was really underwhelming for a contenders match especially after what we saw last week. Keep writing bud
V/Eviction
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