[Master Rock]

Timeless you verse was cool and playful ... But not really my style but it was quite cohesive and clean. Adverse this verse seemed like someone else was writing it at certain areas and this did not seem like you typically style...it was a bit predictable and novice at times...where I was left to scratch my head and try to figure out what went wrong? But and the second half I started to see you brilliance shine a bit more. Anyways...upon second read I giving it to timeless based on a higher reading level. I thought I was going to give to Adverse but I couldn't get past the basic vocab at certain parts.