@
Frank
You damn near killed everyone with the rhyme schemes, that was your stongest point, the only complain is the repeating of phrases, otherwise this was fucking fire and you keep me entertained throughout the whole piece and I never got bored reading it, I still hate the panning you do it throws me off sometimes.
@
Master Rock
You keep it short and the lines was easier to follow than your opponents, not neccesarly better just easier to read, nothing really resonated with me as a reader and I'm left with kind of a "whatever" reaction, your oponnents was able to pull me into his more.
That's why I'm voting for frank, he pulled me in with the rhyme schemes alone.
V/FRANK