Enjoying Enigma's Illuminati heavy imagery/symbolism style it works well for you, all the different references were interesting and the language used for Illuminati kind of naturally fits with the theme of "philosophical phantasm." Frank you are very creative with multiple rhymes I notice you do it a lot. E.g., " It was a specially designed current, that froze matter in a instant. Zoom." It is an entertaining style of writing. The time portions were a good way to give the writing pacing and did not feel artificial. Enjoyed Enigma's more natural fitting writing style. Voting for Enigma.
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