[Mike Wrecka]

I’m pressed for time so this will be brief my apologies.

NYC - I absolutely hated your take on this topic. It was corny. And cheesy. BUT with that being said you took a terrible take on a topic and made it a fairly enjoyable read. Good flow good end rhymes overall took what was a disaster decision imo and salvaged it. Only you could have done that.

Frank - much more enjoyed this take on topic. The flow was immaculate. Sometimes when I read your stuff I think that some lesser writers might not catch the flow and cadence because it is so advanced and intricate with inners and all types of next level shit going on that if you don’t get on the ride it you might miss it’s brilliance. I loved the different aspects of the ocean and the imagery used.

Overall just thought Frank had the better take AND imo the better flow and imagery. It was very close but i got

Frank