[Master Rock]

This this was great from both sides in regards to the storytelling. I hope to be where they are in that regard. I'm still struggling on creating a universe like that but it takes one to put themselves deeply in it to create that. Great job from both of you. I really like both. I thought that nyc's verse was a little cheesy at times and a bit corny. But it had a massive amount of depth. Frank on the other side really told an amazing story and really got into the details. I like that the NYC told a story from the person's perspective and I like the fact that Frank story was from the perspective of a pirate. So all in all with these verses both being incredibly detailed and engaging I'll have to give it to NYC based on the stylistic choices of how it flowed because I was able to read nyc's verse in a manner that can be brought with a beat attached. Frank's on the other hand had bits and pieces of rhythm but the rhythm wasn't throughout the verse. Therefore NYC I'm giving it to you.