[Objective]

First off, what a dope fucking topic you got. Looking forward to read how the battlers approach this one.

Brokenhal0: Digging your title. Interesting, I take it your main character is strapped to a sherpa and is having a psychotic episode being carried up/down a mountain? The first 3 sentences really caught my attention but after you kinda lose me in the process.
Action packed sentences that's a bit hard to grasp the meaning of at times, but I'm guessing the guy strapped to the sherpa is conversing this to him. Seems to me he's speaking in tongues through a lot of it, kind of difficult for me to grasp what you're going for but the chaos in the image and some imagery is definitely caught well here and there.

Overall I feel like the story and what's going on could have been made a little more obvious, cus as it stands now the piece as a whole is a bit all over the place. Entertaining read regardless, the visuals are cool.

Eviction: Good intro, definitely catching the sci-fi fantasy feel and the premise is easy to understand. Loving the story you got going tbh, sentences such as this shows that you have a knack for it:

This mission was partially low-key, a Captain Kirk is really what they needed to have on hand.
A master of the universe, so if we’re stranded we can eat the particle dust before we land,

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The other astronauts died from panic as the stars collapsed, I treated it like a camping trip.
I was the last man standing, which is an irony because I was never considered a candidate,
To “stand” in this abandoned ship. I guess that’s karma for the way you treated your mechanic.
When I make it home I’ll take a few souvenirs, gathering your bones; pretending they're ceramic…

Interesting story and feel like you portrayed the other astronauts as the sharks surrounding your main character which ties it to the topic. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but nevertheless that's my interpretation of it.

Dope closure and definitely bittersweet seeing how he found what he was looking for but it wasn't acknowledged by anyone.

Vote: Eviction. His story was dope af and well written from beginning to end. Great flow, visuals and plot brought it all together in a dope entertaining read that's definitely solid and a threat to the league as a whole. BrokenHal0's story was cool as well but a bit to chaotic for me to get to the point where I'd even consider his over Evictions really strong submission this week.