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Eviction · 05-21-2022, 08:24 PM

@Dominate
Hahah different story indeed, sounds like a girl with very shallow values and not confortable in her own skin, maybe if it was longer you could have a twist and they botched her rhinoplasty and implants LOL, I like this nothing special but it did the job.
@Master Rock
Your piece was cool too, I dont think it had the effort that dominate showed, I do like your rhyme schemes more, I didn't feel there was too much to your story as dom was able to do in such a short linecount, I think this is where it gets interesting we all have to cut back from 60 lines and tell a compelling story in 40 or less, we can do it boys!

anyway, I think dom got this his story was more interesting and entertaining, even had some humour with the testimonials that was cool.
v/dom

05-21-2022, 08:24 PM	#9
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	@Dominate Hahah different story indeed, sounds like a girl with very shallow values and not confortable in her own skin, maybe if it was longer you could have a twist and they botched her rhinoplasty and implants LOL, I like this nothing special but it did the job. @Master Rock Your piece was cool too, I dont think it had the effort that dominate showed, I do like your rhyme schemes more, I didn't feel there was too much to your story as dom was able to do in such a short linecount, I think this is where it gets interesting we all have to cut back from 60 lines and tell a compelling story in 40 or less, we can do it boys! anyway, I think dom got this his story was more interesting and entertaining, even had some humour with the testimonials that was cool. v/dom