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Old 05-20-2022, 09:51 AM   #5
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This was a dope battle, Mike came with some smooth intricate voodoo and obj came with a longer narrative that has a nice twist to the ending. Some of objective’s wording is a bit jarring to me but I’ll chalk that up to him being from Norway or something. Cool bit of storytelling. Usually I prefer narrative takes like that to what Mike did, as a stand-alone piece I thought mike’s had more flair to it and said more in less space than objective. My fav line in the battle was mikes closer, it was dope, but obj had a dope closer too it was just presented differently bc he had a narrative and not an abstract monologue. I liked both but I’m giving it to objective thought it hit the topic longer and harder
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