Rock - butterfly wings line was dope. Other than that it was a bit bland and emo, thought you could’ve made it hit much harder if you were gonna choose a darker theme like that. Bit more nuance and character development outside of the obvious. Not my fav piece from you but I look forward to you bouncing back with a stronger verse next wk tho
Dom was a lighter take, kind of comical and creative. I liked how it broke down into intro, testimonial, then final sales pitch. Now we know you have dark humor hit pieces in your Arsenal. Dead @ Candy’s testimonial btdubs lmffagsulkmfssh
vote dom
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