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Old 05-09-2022, 09:52 PM   #8
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Man so much great writing in one spot. I mean every single verse was engaging in its own way. Eviction had a verse that felt strong and angry but yet engaging and really took on the feelings of the character throughout. Damn on the other hand painted vast picture that placed you in the setting and made you feel as though you were there every step of the way to the end. It was interesting how it started to do a plot twist and I started to figure out that it was Gaston. Before I even knew that it was Gaston. Which was interesting. Adverse on the other hand had a quite artistically poetic vocab intensive abstract metaphorical delightful averse nd and mad quotables that took my breath away at certain parts. If I could give this an order I will go adverse first, second would be Dom, and eviction will be third. Honestly all the writing was top notch here and a great show out from all of you I'm highly impressed. I'm going to give it to adverse.
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